The Use of Allegory – CSFF Tour, Day 3

I wanted to title this “The Use of Allegory in Hunter Brown and the Secret of the Shadow – CSFF Blog Tour, Day 3,” but it seemed like it might be a bit long. 😉 However, that’s really where I want to start.

Hunter Brown and the Secret of the Shadow by Christopher and Allan Miller (Warner Press), of course, is the March CSFF Blog Tour feature, and in my review of the book yesterday, I mentioned the allegorical elements and my intention to write about them in more detail today.

First a little background. When the CSFF administration team first discussed whether or not to include Hunter Brown on the tour, one reaction to the short plot synopsis was that it was so transparently allegorical. And sure enough, that same statement appeared on the tour, as a weakness.

As I added my comments to the ongoing discussion, I realized wrong assumptions about allegory might actually become one of my pet peeves! 😮

In actuality, true allegory is a sub-genre of science fiction and fantasy. Here’s an excellent definition:

Allegory is a form of extended metaphor, in which objects, persons, and actions in a narrative, are equated with the meanings that lie outside the narrative itself. The underlying meaning has moral, social, religious, or political significance, and characters are often personifications of abstract ideas as charity, greed, or envy.

Thus an allegory is a story with two meanings, a literal meaning and a symbolic meaning.

– from Ted Nellen’s Cyber English

As Wikipedia notes, allegory often is present in parables and fables and often has a rhetorical purpose.

Of late, allegory seems to have fallen into disfavor, at least by Christians. I suspect one of the great fantasy writers may be partly to blame. Evidently J. R. R. Tolkien made a strong statement against allegory in the introduction to the second edition of the Lord of the Rings: “It is neither allegorical nor topical….I cordially dislike allegory in all its manifestations, and always have done so since I grew old and wary enough to detect its presence.” (from Wikipedia, allegory) Interestingly, he made this statement because many were seeing the story as an allegory of World War II.

But here’s the point: because Tolkien didn’t like it does not mean allegory is bad. The use of an extended metaphor is not bad. Writing about one thing with a secondary meaning beneath the surface is not bad. Even if the metaphor is fairly obvious.

Wikipedia includes quite a list of works considered allegorical, but in my thinking few are true allegories, in which the metaphor permeates the story and is maintained throughout. Pilgrim’s Progress by John Bunyan is a superb allegory, as is Animal Farm by George Orwell. The first is religious, the second political.

Other examples of allegorical works or ones with strong allegorical elements listed by Wikipedia include the following:

Dante Alighieri – The Divine Comedy
Edmund Spenser – The Faerie Queene
Jonathan Swift – A Tale of a Tub [and Gulliver’s Travels, I might add]
Joseph Addison – Vision of Mirza
Herman Melville – The Confidence-Man
C.S. Lewis – The Chronicles of Narnia

    “generic allegorical elements of good and evil, as well as many Christian themes, expressed in a narrative with strong fantasy fiction elements and credible characters: not fully an allegory.

    Modern allegories in fiction tend to operate under constraints of modern requirements for verisimilitude within conventional expectations of realism.” (Wikipedia, allegory)

Albert Camus – The Plague, The Stranger
John Irving – A Prayer for Owen Meany
Philip Pullman – His Dark Materials
Franz Kafka
Frank Herbert – Dune.

Allegorical films include:
Fritz Lang’s Metropolis
Ingmar Bergman’s The Seventh Seal
Stanley Kubrick’s 2001: A Space Odyssey
Star Trek: The Undiscovered Country – The Cold War
The Matrix – a retelling of Plato’s Allegory of the Cave

So what does all this have to do with Hunter Brown and the Secret of the Shadow? Clearly, the Miller Brothers used allegory in Hunter Brown. However, the story isn’t allegorical. Yes, the Author is clearly God. Yes, the Author’s code is the Bible, and yes Codebearers likely represent Christians.

But who is Evan or Sam or Gabby or Hope or Stretch or Belac or Faldyn or Ephraim? These are simply characters in an adventure fantasy acting in ways consistent to the personality the authors gave them. They don’t step out of character to preach to the reader. They are authentic and tell Hunter what fits the occasion. Sometimes he believes them and sometimes not. Some of them help and encourage him and some don’t. Some are friends and some are formidable foes.

Here’s the bottom line. One genre trope in fantasy is the struggle between good and evil. How can we who believe in a loving, supreme God not equate Him with ultimate good, no matter how the author intended to write it? Consequently, whether Tolkien determined to show spiritual truths or not, I see God and His Son Jesus Christ when I read about Gandalf and Aragorn.

That the Author in Hunter Brown was fashioned by Christians who most likely had God in mind when they wrote in the part should not disqualify the story from being good, exciting, entertaining. I don’t see that putting God in stories and having Him act as He acts is considered a weakness. Having Him show up allegorically is really no different.

Of course, one problem with using allegory is that some readers will interpret all elements allegorically and find some wanting. Check out Steve Rice’s post about the weaknesses he sees in Hunter Brown. And be sure to visit the other bloggers listed (and check marked with post links) in Monday’s post.

14 Comments

  1. The “darkness” I was speaking of wasn’t so much the hope that the Codebearers had. Yes, that’s great. The thing that really got me was Hope’s destiny and how it came about (I don’t want to drop a spoiler even here). The specifics really took me by surprise, especially given the “cartoony” nature of the cover.

    Maybe it’s a little thing and maybe I’m overreacting. But that’s where that came from.

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  2. I realize that posting late at night has a definite affect on how much I can contribute to these conversations, but you may want to check out tonight’s post, wherein in I interview Allan Miller and get some of his thoughts on allegory :).

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  3. If that’s allegory, I love allegory! It’s the best stuff out there, we need more of it! I didn’t really enjoy “Hunter Brown,” but there were a few good parts…and those parts were all allegorical 🙂

    I wonder what precisely Tolkien meant by “allegory”? LOTR isn’t devoid of spiritual truth by any means. If you read Tolkien’s letters, you’ll see that he talks quite a bit about the spiritual themes he intentionally put in LOTR. It’s really quite fascinating 😉

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  4. Amen Becky, I totally agree with your thoughts on Allegory. It is one of the strong literary forms we have and though, yes it has fallen in disfavor, I agree with you wholeheartedly. The form itself is not the problem with this book. Though I haven’t read the whole of Hunter Brown, I support the author’s right to use allegory as they see fit. The Divine Comedy, Animal Farm and Pilgrim’s Progress are some of my favorite classic allegories, also Hinds Feet on High Places and of course, The Chronicles of Narnia. C.S. Lewis was a master of the form, and he used it very well in several of his books.

    Also, as you mentioned, Tolkien’s rejection of TLotR as allegory makes sense to me. The books, while very spiritual, don’t use all that many clear metaphorical parallels. It feels to me like a broader story of Good vs Evil, rather than a very specific allegory where the Elves are Angels, and Frodo is the Christ figure (or whatever your thesis might be), though I’m sure many people would disagree. I am now curious to go back and read Tolkien’s 2nd edition introduction to the books. Thanks for the post! : )

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  5. Becky,
    Thanks for touring the Miller Brothers book for March’s blog tour. It’s a good fun read for young adult and middle-school readers. This age group may not pick up on the allegorical aspects of the Hunter Brown story, but they will pick up on bullies picking on the weak, not being in the popular group at school, and most importantly when others fail you there is still someone they can depend upon. Hunter Brown introduces key spiritual concepts to YA readers in an interesting and captivating way using allegory. Middle school students live for the moment. A story that keeps their interest during and after reading the book is an accomplishment. A story like Hunter Brown that both captures young readers’ imagination and teaches spiritual keys is a rarity.

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  6. Hi, John. I suspected you were thinking of Hope. I quoted those lines because that was the Codebearer response when Gabby’s husband died. That and others who died and Hope’s own prophetic dream prepared me, so I didn’t have a sense of darkness at all. The “how” was quite shocking, perhaps, but it fits with the ending completely, and with the theme that we may wish to be better than we are but that doesn’t change the fact that we have evil in our hearts.

    SPOILER ALERT
    And since Venator was Hunter, it wouldn’t really have mattered who delivered the blow. That Hunter wasn’t aware of hatred or malice in his heart, that he in fact cared for Hope a great deal simply intensified the point, I thought. END SPOILER ALERT.

    But I will say, I thought from the start that the cover, while eye-catching and attractive, seemed too young for the characters and the story.

    Becky

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  7. Rachel, that was a great interview. I’m glad you asked Allan the question about “allegory.” Honestly, is it even allegory if it isn’t “paper thin”? If the symbolism is attempting to be subtle but is obvious, then that would be transparent symbolism and I think there would be cause for people to say, This writer failed in what he attempted. But if a writer goes out to create a symbolic connection he extends throughout the story and succeeds in doing so, how is this a bad thing?

    People can say, I don’t like allegory and that’s fine because we all have different tastes, but as I see it, a review loses credibility if the critique says, The book is bad because it is allegorical and obviously so.

    Becky

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  8. If you read Tolkien’s letters, you’ll see that he talks quite a bit about the spiritual themes he intentionally put in LOTR. It’s really quite fascinating

    Crista, I’d never heard this before. Great to know, since Tolkien is often the one writers use to justify not working on themes intentionally.

    (Actually my new wrong-view-of-allegory pet peeve fits in quite nicely with my don’t-include-intentional-messages one! 😉 )

    Becky

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  9. Alex, I agree with you—Tolkien wasn’t writing allegory, but he certainly used symbols and extended metaphors. Those aren’t obvious, nor should they be.

    To be honest, I aim for something in between the more allegorical C. S. Lewis fantasies and the symbolic Tolkien ones. I think there’s a lot to gain in prompting readers to think, which Tolkien certainly did. But I also think there’s a lot to gain in retelling the old, old story in a fresh way. I’ve heard of strange cultic groups latching onto Tolkien’s works and claiming him as their own. Would I ever want that to happen to something I wrote? So is there a happy medium?

    Tim, you made a good point, I think. The target age group for the Hunter Brown books aren’t probably looking behind the scenes, at least not initially. They may at some point, and I think that’s ideal. If the story is a good story, but it makes the reader think about issues after the fact, then it has succeeded big time.

    Becky

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  10. Ooooooh, Becky, this is a topic near and dear to my heart. What to make of Allegory? I remember that when the Door Within books came out, some of my harshest critics were Christians claiming that the allegory was too strong…or too easily spotted. Duh. If you’re a Christian with a decent knowledge of the Bible, of course you’ll see the parallels. I wrote back to several critics saying, in effect, I’m not trying to hide it. Why should I be?

    If there was no story built around the allegory, well, fine, I accept the criticism, but there certainly was. Even Rob Bedford at Science Fiction and Fantasy World.com said that the story stands on its own and can be enjoyed by readers whether they are aware of the allegory or not.

    I feel like good allegory lays a pathway for truth, like the mold into which molten steel is poured to make a sword. Maybe, just maybe, someone reads The Door Within or Dragonspell or Hunter Brown and starts asking the questions for which Jesus is the only answer. That’s my hope.

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  11. Great comments, Wayne. It’s ironic, isn’t it, that no one complains about having to read Animal Farm because it’s too allegorical. The connections between the pigs leading the revolution and the events surrounding it and the leaders of the Communist revolution and the events surrounding it are so plain to anyone familiar with that period of history. Any child could follow it.

    I’ve said before, I think Christian writers are swinging the pendulum of correction too far in the effort to get away from “preachy fiction.” Yes, tell a good story. But part of craft is weaving in theme. And allegory is one way to do that.

    I’ll reiterate one other thing, however. If an author is using symbolism instead of allegory, then it does need to be fresh, original, and not so transparent. I think readers need to dig a little.

    But again, that’s variable, as you said. For non-Christians, they would have to dig to recognize the Christ figure in Hunter Brown. For Christians, there are other things to dig for, far beyond the “obvious.”

    BTW, Wayne, a couple bloggers compared Hunter Brown to the Door Within. I thought that was accurate—you wrote your story with similar goals and to the same audience, primarily (Hunter might be aimed a little more toward boys). I hadn’t thought about the similarities until I read that, then thought, sure. The kids who like DW would also like HB, without a doubt.

    Becky

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  12. This is such a pertinent topic for me as I am in the process of polishing up my allegorical fantasy novel. You’ve made some excellent observations and comments.

    I’m also reading Israel My Beloved by Kay Arthur. It is a historical novel that is allegorical in nature telling the story of God’s love for Israel and Israrel’s journey through history.

    Rebecca, I listed your site as an award recipient on my blog. I really enjoy your wisdom and insight into fiction.

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  13. If you want a good example of good Christian allegory, try The Man Who Was Thursday by G K Chesterton. It seems wonderfully old fashioned now. I wonder if it is his writing style, the setting or just the use of allegory itself which seems passe. I read it again recently and discovered that I understood a lot more and enjoyed it much more than the first time. I think I first read it when I was in my twenties and understood everything. Reading it again lately I was surprised by how little I understood at the time.

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  14. Lynn, thanks so much for the award. I forgot about it when I wrote my post today, but I think it will be fun to play along. 😉 I’m glad the allegory discussion was helpful.

    And Ken, thanks for the Chesterton title. I have yet to read him, so that might be a good starting place. I know what you mean by discovering that you understood less than what you thought when you first read it. I remember that when I first read Gulliver’s Travels.

    Becky

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